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Submit your art here, and during the next few hours two artists will be redlining your work live on Picarto! We'll be in a voice chat together, so you'll be hearing two perspectives!
Keep it respectful. :^)

-featuring Marmalade Mum and Apuru-kun

https://picarto.tv/MarmaladeMum
https://picarto.tv/Apuru

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>>7170159
Very well.

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Here ya go!

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>>7170159
i have a whole albu, of you naked

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>>7170159
since you're offering

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>>7170178
bigger res

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>>7170162
1/3

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>>7170184
2/3

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>>7170185
3/3

>> No.7170189

>>7170187
Upgraded mikufag at a pro level is a sight to see.

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is not a joke

>> No.7170192

>>7170162

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never show off this one because I was disappointment in how it turned out.(shilled out the LK one around this site since it looked actually decent.) Wanted the hand to be more flat on his chest but no matter what I did it looked like shit. same with the head tilted upwards. Yes this is a reference to FF2's art by Yoshitaka amano

>> No.7170194

>>7170190
ayo

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>>7170162
WITH IMAGE THIS TIME?? FUCK

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>>7170159
That was fun guys.

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>>7170159
thank u!

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K

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>>7170159
what im working on

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>>7170182
Marmalade is struggling with the exact same problem I have been working on for a long time. 4 legs simply to not fit elegantly into one pelvis.

>> No.7170246

is there going to be a vod somewhere I cant stay for the full stream

>> No.7170252

>>7170240
I remember seeing this before on here, but don't remember which thread.

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>>7170256
It's a huge improvement. A much better sense of depth and the forms of the legs. Thanks for the edit.

>>7170240
This is mine as well. Feel free to please not redline these, They are just other examples of this same idea.

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Wouldn't mind a redline

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This was a sketch for a vidya request thread I can post the ref as well, also if there's going to be a vod somewhere please let us know because I'd like to review the footage a few times. Thanks

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>>7170193

>> No.7170289

>>7170285
huge thankies my dude. I need to fuckin' get to McGrind

>> No.7170293
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This was a sketch for a vidya request thread I can post the ref as well, also if there's going to be a vod somewhere please let us know because I'd like to review the footage a few times. Thanks

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>>7170293
the ref and the character ref is here:
https://i.4cdn.org/v/1715904420575804.png

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>>7170193
Not a traditional redline, but some sketches to show how making your lines a little looser and focussing on expressing shape is a good study point.

>> No.7170303

>>7170296
another big ty my man. kinda glad it wasent a redline. keep on at it.

>> No.7170305

do I listen to the left stream or the right stream lol

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>>7170200
1/2

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>>7170315
2/2

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>>7170182
This was even more fun
>>7170256
This is amazing
>>7170275
shit, I didn't see this one! Fortunately I did a different pose lol. Fucking Cool as always.

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>>7170200

>> No.7170321

Stopping now! Thanks for everyone who submitted <3 may continue tomorrow. :^)

>> No.7170324

>>7170321
good thread thanks! sameish time tomorrow if it's happening?

>> No.7170325

Great thread, great stream.

>> No.7170330

>>7170324
just missed it, is there a place to rewatch the stream?

>> No.7170332

Hi, this is Apuru-kun. Hope you guys enjoyed the redlining, and got something useful out of us!

It's been fun, and I appreciate the enthusiasm you guys brought to the thread (wasn't expecting so many contributions.)

>> No.7170342

>>7170321
>>7170332
Didnt get to participate but i hope you both do more of these in the future, take care!

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Thank you to everyone for participating and letting Apuru and I red-line your work! We had a lot of fun figuring out what to fix and coming to different conclusions for more perspective! There's no right way to correct something since something can always be done better. <3
Feel free to keep posting more works you want a red-line on since I'll be back again!

>>7170324
Tomorrow around the same time I'll stream, and perhaps Apuru will join me again. I'll do my best to help as many of you as possible!

>>7170330
Didn't save it as a VOD sadly

>> No.7170360

The stream was quite scrumptious. Enjoyed drawing along
>Captcha
>GGsPM

>> No.7170399

>>7170358
Is there a recording of the stream?

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>>7170358
Join us in the Drawpile sometime, mommy. We'd love to have you!

>>7064255

>> No.7170879

>>7170189
he doesn't deserve it

>> No.7170972

Starting back up in an hour!

>> No.7171031

>>7170972
Online doing more red lines now!

>> No.7171033

>>7171031
Can we still submit?

>> No.7171040

>>7171033
Yeah!

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>>7171040
Sick, thank you! Here, I'll throw this on the pile then. I kind of hit a roadblock and never finished it, so it could definitely use a redline.

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>>7171031
>>7171040
working on a instant loss for my hentai game. but i've spent over 2 days on this and could use a second opinion. i think i fucked up something when going onto lineart. and i think that the pussy might be too low. any general tips for consistency, where do you guys stream at? i'm at work.

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>>7171040
Tyvm in advance !
Trying to draw a rocking chair from the front is killing me

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>>7171040
Tyvm in advance !
Trying to draw a rocking chair from the front

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>> No.7171073

>>7171064
Ty, that's what I was trying to go for, sorry for the very rough sketch and small file.

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>>7170283
Don't forget to construct the body under the clothing. Work on your line work too, qt!

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It's super greedy for me to post so many images, If someone else needs a redline you can just skip me. There is a lot of problematic anatomy here, I have a hard time with fat fold and hips especially.

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Hey I have this drawing I'm inking and a color study I've done, I'd love any advice you have on taking this from a sketch to a finished piece.

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>> No.7171125

>>7171111
Really like it, except for the face.

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>>7171043

>> No.7171128

>>7171126
You literally saved my life, I am now summonable for boss battles.

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>>7171119
Genuinely love everything about this. Here's what I thought would improve it.

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>> No.7171153

>>7171145
thank you so much!

>> No.7171154

>>7171055
this one

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Done streaming! Thanks for everyone who joined! Feel free to give each other advice/red-lines for the rest of the thread. I won't be returning <3

>> No.7171175

>>7171172
thanks for the stream!

>> No.7171176

>>7171166
Nta but you draw hot women cus you are good at anatomy I draw hot women because I’m lonely. We are not the same

>> No.7171178

>>7171172
Thank you kindly!

>> No.7171191

>>7171149
You should spend at least on the face at least half the time you spent on the feet

>> No.7171323 [DELETED] 

Hey Marmalade Mum, can you post that screenshot of that one 4chan post that said "i wanna have a real life shota relationship with marmalade mum" that you had as your twitter banner for a while

>> No.7171352

>>7171104
FUCK i completely missed the stream! Thanks for the redline regardless! I don't suppose anyone remembers the tl;dr of what was said about this? Sorry again, something came up and I couldn't be there for it.

>> No.7171356

>>7171352
Basically she said that having a ref photo was more than enough to get this pic right. Just place the drawing on top of the photo and see what's "wrong" about it.
She did praised how you did the nose. It wasn't much to fix honestly.

>> No.7171370

Yo, isn't advertising/begging against the rules?

>> No.7171372

>>7171352
She said you need to study the reference better. Something along the lines of "did he even look at the reference?"

>> No.7171467

>>7171323
I wasn't trolling by the way I genuinely wanted the pic because it was funny ( ._.)

>> No.7172150

>>7170318
your style is legitimately revolting and unappealing, every time I see your posts I get a nauseous feeling. unironically just copy someone else's style, being unique doesn't excuse being ugly

>> No.7172187

>>7170318
Cool art, keep at it!

>> No.7172197

>>7172187
nah man
>>7172150
is right.

the guy is delusional about his own skill level and gets off on posting shitty "redlines" that are just /beg/ level drawings that he's convinced are good because he discovered using straight lines and confuses that with a stylistic decision.

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>>7172150
Nah, I won't. You care too much. I just use that style to explore designs really quick and do fun shit. I won't be casting roses before swines, this is 4ch, so I'll behave as a swine as well, lol

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>>7172217
>dude this is my secret style only for 4chan posts my real style is sooooooo good but its too good for anyone here

>> No.7172234

>>7172220
That's right, who the fuck am I to put myself on top of my /ic/ bros. I'll eat their food, play their games and sing their songs. This is /ic/ and we are all absolute begs having fun.

>> No.7172241

>>7172234
>I'll eat their food, play their games and sing their songs

fucking cringe man. it's an internet forum
at least you admit that you're a /beg/.

>> No.7172245

>>7172241
Sure
>>7172187
Thanks anon

>> No.7172247

>>7172245
not "sure", it's "yes".

>> No.7172266

>>7172247
kys sour nigger

>> No.7172268

>>7172266
haha there it is, you really do believe that you're better than the average /ic/ user. Knew I could sniff out your gay little word games

Seeeethe

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>>7172268
I'm other anon you retarded nigger.

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Oh no did I miss the redline party?

>> No.7172655

>>7172220
>>7172241
>>7172268
Man, this is exactly why no one should come here shilling their social media shit, especially big coom accounts.
Yes, that anon has an /ic/ exclusive style and if you weren't an underage clout craving faggot, you would understand why and it is not only to avoid retards like you, but also to further learn the craft.

In how many styles do you dabble? Just one because you're le epic artiste that is so heckin and valid on social media and people recognize your style? Fuckin poser fraud cringe as fuck unironically
Wait, wait, wait.. let me guess; also drawing badly is cringe because it's not good and you can't consume it?

How do you even attribute
>wow he think he betta than me? NOOOOO cringe cringe fr hehe im so heckin smart
to an Anon?

Are you genuinely clinically retarded or just underage?
Post your work, shitter.

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>>7172655
We could have a nice thread with some actual critique but instead you decide not to ignore the shitters and be a sperg and that is exactly why no one comes here in the first place.

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>>7172659
You're supposed to be an Anon here and if people cared about critique, they would not namefag and shill their social media and use the already existing generals instead.

Big nsfw accounts only attract minors and clout chasing faggots.

>> No.7172742

There is an entire thread dedicated to advertising your stuff. I mean this is cool to host these, but could you imagine if more big artists started to come here to do the exact same thing? We would probably be overrun with underaged users.

I guess /ic/ would get a resurgence, but at what cost?

>> No.7172754

>>7170318
>>7172217
wait, wtf, redline anon, you were tableguy this whole time???

>> No.7172755

>>7172754
>>7172217
>>7170318
Holy shit i knew that anatomy seemed familiar, why the alterego deskfella?

>> No.7172769

>>7172646
nice bell prolapse

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>>7172655
Thanks anon, I just wanted to point out that this thing you wrote, it is true, and it is very important:
>but also to further learn the craft
That one picrel I just did, I don't know if that's right, but I did it because I needed to see if it was possible for me to put it on paper. I's like solving a puzzle or to answer questions in those quiz TV shows. It is a lot of fun and addicting too. But, you have to have the tools to do it, and when you don't have that, that could be very frustrating, and it really sucks. Once you have those tools, it's important to know that it's not enough to "have it" you have to put it to the test. And take it to the off road track all the time. And this is the place to do that shit lol.
Don't worry about the crabby, I'm gonna be honest, I have fun when I read that stuff. I even make a funny voice in my head reading that and, man, I shit myself laughing inside. I know it may not be fun for other artists, more sensible and pure of heart, but, it's 4ch, we are here for the dark humor too, an sometimes we must play the bait to get that funny shit. lmao.
>>7172754
>>7172755
No, I'm not table guy. Big fan though. He's on another level. I think that I confused him with another artist too, I thought this one was TG as well >>7170275 (?) I don't know if people here can appreciate how good that guy is. But, I kinda take things from other artists of course, like the anon above said, we're here to learn, if we can take advantage of what this site has to offer. If I tackle monster girls, I immediately think "what would TeeGee do"? lol

>> No.7172788

>>7172742
The board is already clogged with doomerism, aislop, and shitposts. Cris had 3 threads at one point that stayed up for days. I'd welcome critique streams and you'd be a fool to turn them down.

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>>7172772
>I needed to see if it was possible for me to put it on paper. I's like solving a puzzle or to answer questions in those quiz TV shows. It is a lot of fun and addicting too. But, you have to have the tools to do it, and when you don't have that, that could be very frustrating, and it really sucks. Once you have those tools, it's important to know that it's not enough to "have it" you have to put it to the test. And take it to the off road track all the time
Brother, i have seen your drawings many times and although i am not personally a fan of the subjects or it being my personal preferences, i can tell you have fun.
I wish you only good things in your pursuit of art.

>> No.7172804

>>7172772
>No, I'm not table guy. Big fan though. He's on another level.
Thats exactly what Tableguy would say, Table…

>> No.7172808

>>7172795
Thank you so much man. I can see you have fun too. I hope the best for you as well.
>>7172804
Exactly, lol.
I wish I had the balls that guy has to grab a real piece of paper a pen and do that shit he does, and then take a photo of that and post it. He's a fucking legend, untouchable.

>> No.7172889

>>7172769
Oh no, does it not read like it's lodged in there? The idea was the handle is up her proper and she's ringing the bell

>> No.7172963

>>7172742
Like there wasn't any here in the first place with the amount of retarded muh east vs west, ai shilling, "is it too late draw?",frog posting, and so on. With this, it would actually make /ic/ a somewhat respectable place to learn art here.

>> No.7172968

>>7172889
no that's what it looks like, he's being funny